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Sounds good and well produced, but you killed the song.
This song(and the amazing FC remix) relies HEAVILY on the effects of the strings in the backround, as it's melody backbone. Youll notice certain(if not all) melodic tracks have usually a lead, synths, and bassline...what made the FC remix so amazing was the way his signature synths expanded the melody by hundredfolds, and his signature bassline kept the rhythm energetic. And you'll notice the main melody doesn't come the hook, but rather in the back.
The point I'm trying to make here is that your remix lacks what gives this track it's meat & potatoes: it has a synth, and lead, but it doesn't have a melody in the backround to play off of...to tell you the truth, compared to the other remixes, yours is very dull and repetitive, almost like trying to convert this epic original into a techish type of track. Don't be offended...it sounds really good and clean, but you need to integrate to the most important part of the song, and unfortatly with this remix, you failed to do that.
Look forward to hearing your work in the future!
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