Well, when the bass come in I can't help but to think of Paul van Dyk. Sounds very nice and clear though I'm not too sure about the melody. I'm sure it could work with more elements added to it, but as it stands now some of those chord changes are a bit to weird for me.
the melody... its starts dreamy,but then it kinda ... i dont know, the notes dont realy fit,
i guess you should tweak the melody, and its can be very cool!
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never ditch an idea just put it away for a while and come back to it later..
the melody is a bit familiar.. except for the last couple of phrases, that reaLLy need to change... they just dont fit im afraid
the bassline, its a bit boring for me but then again i dont like PvD's stuff (and its a similar bassline to the one hes been using for 10 years) so you can put that down to personal taste
very clean and crisp sounding synths, maybe a little too clean? again this could be personal taste
structurally the song is sound though , it flows nicely up until the weird notes in the melody start to happen
I'm not too sure about the melody. I'm sure it could work with more elements added to it, but as it stands now some of those chord changes are a bit to weird for me.
