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I donno, it just sounds to simple, other then that there are acouple of issues u need to take care about.
First the percussion, way to load, and very simple and anoying after a while, in fact the whole percussion stays the same from the beggining of the tune to the end. Try using softer anf more veriable samples.
0:27, There comes a string/choir which goes on until about 2:15, i really dont like the sound of it, way to amaturish and simple, like a flat sound, dont like it.
The build up is also very simple just thoes snares and the stabs which i find pretty (לא קשורים לכל הקטע).
Anyways gil, i excpect more of you, for the past few months you were releasing new stuff each week, or even in shorter periods of time.
Maybe you should try putting more work in every work you come up with, im sure that if youll put more work in your tunes they will sound alot nicer.
Good luck...
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