quote: | Originally posted by idoru
I take AP English classes, so I know how to analyze a piece of writing, and there is no hidden message. You're one of those people who likes to attempt to find a deeper meaning just to look cool. |
LOL .
To my knowledge, i believe that you have overseen the basic necessities of a good essay.
Mr. Schulz lacks a good "attention getter" as his first sentence states "I have never posted here on Tranceaddict" - Schulz....
I mean, c'mon who the heck would reply to ANYONE that says that after reading that sentence, because most likely someone would disregard a person that wrote that due to their "elitist" nature and move on with thier life.
He also lacks a good Thesis statement and overrules the common knowledge of a 3 paragraph essay by rebeling and not indenting or giving a concise body paragraph. He hasn't given much thought to how he presented the so called topic sentences, wherever they may be, and really doesn't give me a reason to read or be intrested in the various topic points that he has suggested. But as you read through his "essay" you can pinpoint the transitional sentences, thus i can say that they are really really good. He has problems with subject-verb agreements and it makes it really hard for me to understand who or what Mr. Schulz is referring to in various sentences. It is by far a most complexing "essay".
Anywho, I believe that Mr. Schulz deserves a C+, becuase that is the grade that my english professor gave me for my recent essay.
LOL That was fun for me. And I really do like Dave Piazza for reacting in a horrendous way toward Mr. Schulz. But it is true that we shouldn't really spend our time complaining about what Mr. Schulz has said, therefore contradicting his statement, because personally i beleive that we have worser problems to attend to than fighting over who's better than who or whatever. I mean, gas prices in the states are freakin' AMAZING! And people are dying! OMG! REALLY we should all stop using TA.com for a day and try to spend the time that we have with our loved ones and appreciate it, because one day it may just disappear. Really think about what you guys say on the forums, because it can personally hurt anyone who reads whatever you have said and it really might tick them off. As for me, I barely read 99% of the stuff that people write on here ...and...i...don't ...know...why o_O
In my opinion, Markus Schulz really should've replied to what statements Dave Piazza was trying to convene. I would find it rude to not have my questions replied by ANYONE even if it's jibberish or bleh blah or whatever Mr. Piazza said. And i wonder how long did it take for Mr. Schulz to write that "essay" HEH!... i waste my time here and you're wasting your time reading this crap. It's best to just stay in the TRACKLIST Area ...no fighting there, just good ol' info to be had.
BTW...Niklas Harding conjures some the greatest mixxys EVER!!!...i think he should have his own radio show
CHEERS!
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