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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan
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i am going to post some feedback on the clips i've listened, this may be a good thread please don't troll.
invalyd - NCD: This is actually very good Only remarcable things i'd mention is that i don't like very much the synth stabs around 1:15 i'd quit them or make them more complex, but feel a bit unnecessary, with some extra release and an automation delay would be better.
2.- Kick may need a little bit emphasis on the low end, sounds a bit muddy with the bassline.
Good job never the less not big issues.
Alffi - Uncourttrajet.. : I like the clap you are using here, has a nice progression, hats need more volume and i'd add some shakers around 2:05 instead of another hi hat line to give the track more drive. Feels a bit repetitive but very subtle. Needs a vocal hook or something to be really effective but has potential. About the kick i am not sure what to think it sounds a bit odd at ~3:00 but throughout the track i like how it interacts with the bassline. I'd try with something more conventional though.
Storyteller - Nieuwe tellertrack I like how it sounds, one of your best works i've listened. It needs a melody on top as you point and could be something very similar to Chris Reece or Edx's old stuff which is great.
Bluff Monkey - Sum Howse. This is very very well produced and mixed no things to mention from the technical point of view. Congratulations.
Richard Butler track: I like it, really good one vocals are fine show some extra self confidence, the reverb is very well executed. I won't judge the mix down since youtube is crap but apparently vocals are maybe too loud, shakers need more presence and kick is not punchy enough. You have some eye for drum n bass i'd gently buy an EP of this track and your previous and play it.
atxshotcaller1
E Harris vs Stanley Steel - Greedy (Club MIX) Well this reminds me a lot to the trance stuff i usually make, has a very nice classic feeling. However i see some issues:
-Section that has no bassline that starts around 5:30, this needs some filtering or effects that make it attractive, right now it looks like the last beats of the song.
-I believe kick has a too long tail i like how it is layered with the bassline but kicks with shorter tails tend to sound better in clubs. If you've added reverb on the master or in the kick cut it this will help.
-To be a club mix is a bit stale, is not really danceable. Build up is not really a build up doesn't create any expectations of a sick drop.
I'd add at 3:14 the bassline with the plucks and at 3:41 highpass filter it and start growing it from the lows with a 303 acid line (check Angry Man - Tyrant (Angry Acid Mix)) this might give you some extra ideas, check the drop)
- The drop needs percussion, shakers or something to create some drive, this might server as a chilled down progressive trance track but most probably it would clear the dancefloor.
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Mar-10-2013 22:48
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Storyteller
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Registered: Feb 2005
Location: The Netherlands
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Mar-11-2013 05:43
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djshire
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Registered: Dec 2010
Location: Detroit, MI, USA
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quote: | Originally posted by atxbigballer1
My wip! feedback plz.
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This track very much reminds me of late 90s trance.
The synths, especially the lead, need to be "bigger", either with reverb or some compression to bring them out.
The breakdown needs some kind of percussion.
I feel the kick needs to be a bit more muted, perhaps have a different place in the mix, as right now it seems to be bit too "upfront".
I have no idea how to embed things on this board, I have tried before and it never works, so I'm just going to leave this here
https://soundcloud.com/djshire/predator-demo
This is just a small part of a bigger track, and I've already made some modifications to the what you're hearing, but any feedback would be nice
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Mar-13-2013 00:27
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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan
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quote: | Originally posted by atxbigballer1
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Uff i don't know if this comes from a new trend that mixes chiptunes and techno but i can't say very good things about this.
-Kick is way too distorted
-The first sound that comes in is ear pearcing.
I assume this is a very early idea of what you want to develope later but this is not the way to go lower one octave and get a kick + bass working first.
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Mar-13-2013 10:57
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