i like the ocean mix a lot more than the other one. the bass hitting in between the kicks kinda bothers me, but that is just personal preference i guess. overall they are alright tracks, but it might be good if you made some more layers and introduced some new elements throughout the song. just my opinion though. the production quality is pretty good, are you using fruity loops?

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I agree about the elements, it doesn't sound finished. More of everything really would make it better

thanks guys.

i actually agree with you.

especially with the original mix.

i guess i was just in a rush to get it out, to see what people though of it.

thanks again

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Originally posted by Pumaz Any time, I love helping people out with their tracks whenever I can, I'm getting really addicted to this forum So what are you using to make them?

glad to hear that man.

i use fl studio 4 producers edition
and alot of vst synths.

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Original - Ok, not liking the bass sample too much. Like the percussion a lot. Really like the pads. I agree that this could use some beef. The lead has a nice hard feel to it. Whole song kinda feels lacking. 7/10

Ocean Mix - Ok, i'm already loving this one a lot more. Still, the bass sample kinda bothers me. I still think the lead could use some beef, perhaps layer it a bit more. much better 8/10

Runnign a bit low on bandwith atm m8, is the ocean the same as the midnite mix you sent me?

I really enjoyed the original at first, but i tend to agree with the others when they say it needs more elements....much better than what i turn out though.

The chillout mix i have is superb, and is much better than the original, i really like the melodies in that one, especially the intro melody

nice work on both

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thanks guys
appreciate the feedback.

arctic, yea mate the ocean mix is the same as the midnite mix.

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hmm this one kinda disappoints me mate
as said before, the tracks doesn`t sound complete, the bassline is very basic, aswell as the percussion and atmosphere in the track
waiting for a new track from u.. i know u can do a lot better

greets,

mantis

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Originally posted by TranceMasterUk arctic, yea mate the ocean mix is the same as the midnite mix.

Ah ok, thanks for info

That one is the better one, getting more and more into it all the time :P

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It sounds pretty nice to me mate, but like some said, some fillings up might do the track some good. Especially the original, I'd love to hear it when it's more pumping. The Ocean radio mix is almost perfect I think, radio mixes overall don't need to be that complex I think

Let us know if there are any updates
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