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Ok... here's my opinion...
i find the bass not low enough... u should add more low frequencies to it... try a bass boosting plug-in like the exellent Waves Rbass...
The synth line is too usuall... there are about 1,000,000 tracks that sound the same... i think it would be better for you to try to innovate instead and not immitate.. i'm not saying u have to change it, but work it more a bit...
phasers... Flangers... and stereo effects can add a lot if they will be wisely used...
about your sound, the mixing is good the everything is pumpy and clear but basicly i thing you need to give more excitement to your sound... make it more alive...
about the melody and the composing... i dont have much to add on that subject since i am not a fan of this genre so i dont want to critisize something i'm not very fimiliar with... maybe it's the genre's style... i dont know...
anyway... nice work
try to reach better than this!!! by your sound and production i think u can...
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*** WeLCoMe To ThE FuNKy PLaNeT ***
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i will try to improve my tracks in the future 
