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I need some honest criticism on five tracks. Go to my page, have a listen and tell me what you think!

Listening to Hard Dreams.

First, thanks for hosting it on mp3.com.au (500+k transfer)
Second. Love the synth.
Percussion could be brought down a little maybe. (that tiktik tiktik bit).
Okay, the melody is cool and the sounds are great, but the mix is just too muddy and unclear. Maybe you could clean up the lead synth and second (paddy) synth.

I think its a great idea and you've got something in it, it just doesn't sound clear.

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Well, I don't know how much you're into Reason, but I tried adding a Scream4 unit with tape distortion after the mix. That's probably what makes it muddy. I could try to remove the Scream4 completely. And I probably ought to use another bassdrums. That tiki-tiki thing you're annoyed about, on the other hand will remain. That's part of the sound of this song.

About mp3.com.au... Yeah I love it! It's way better than mp3.com, fatser validation, more bandwidth, more songs WMA support etc.

Anybody wanna listen to the rest of the tracks?