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Very Good
well, at 11 minutes its long...
00:20 i like the bass line ALOT, but not the closed hihat, sounds cheap
0:58 nice vocal, excellent reverse reverb, it may be too loud though. is it compressed within the synth?
1:49 very subtle strengthing of the track here, i like the arp and the crunchy bass as well as the perucession, except it sounds kinda muffled.
2:44 ok, neat breakdown, Awesome stop and good vocal here. Great vocal actually. i dont know if like 2:55, when it comes back in. i do, but maybe skip right into the synth at 3:10. that has alot more energy is really banging.
3:40 i again question the cymbal set your using, i just dont think it fits.
4:00 getting a little bored, needs some more powerful bass
4:20 hmm, interesting string/pad. i like it, but it takes the track in a different direction. definitely makes it less dark and bangin', more anthem-ish.
5:00 bass drum is too loud, as are cymbals.
5:30 the strings fit better here, but i still would like more bass and less cymbal.
6:14 getting bored of the same string/pad melody.
6:30 is the best part of the song so far with a little tweaking. what happened to that vocal sample? i liked that...
ok 6:50 another breakdown, a bit different. i like the delay. maybe exagerate the stereo delay more, its cool
7:10 ok, same string melody is back. switch that up some. or make it less of a lead synth so its not so dominating. its all i notice. change the notes at least
8:20 should be a BD starting there and then keep the build to 8:40 and build to production. that would more progressive style.
9:10 sounds the same as earlier verse. i like it still, but its a bit same'old.
10:20 nice outro starting here. i like the regular bassline here, maybe throw that in the buildup from earlier.
in all, the sample is real strong use it more, and the opening Bassline rocks me, as does the synths that come in at 2:56 and 3:13 (though as i said, maybe lay em at the same time). switch up the percussion, especially the cymbals. work on remastering and possibly changing the melody of the strings, and even consider dropping it all together, imo. VERY good track, has potential to be Bangin' as advertised, but i'd like it cleaned up a bit even more.
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