Hi - I like the way that your sound is mixed, but I have to say that I can't get past the melody. It might be that the clip is so short I can't seem to get the bigger picture, but there's a note in there (it's in the strings, kinda sounds like an old video game engine revving) that just clashes really badly. I mean so much so that it's almost painful.

Maybe if you posted a larger clip we'd have a better idea for the overall sound you were going for?

-Kev

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Your higher melody is pretty good.. but you need a better kick and I agree with the strings.. they sound out of tune.

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Seems like a nice melody, but its kinda hard to tell, the sample is only 13 seconds long. Maybe get a longer one up, and just make it 192kbps.

Sounds are distorted and muddy. They need to be cleared up and the kick is not prominant enough. Good idea, just needs a bit of work.

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