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roderickclosson
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Feb 2004
Location: british columbia
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first post!
i like the lead up 3:53 to 4:47, really got me into this track after that, start needs something more, but gj keep more songs coming!
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Mar-07-2004 09:03
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digitalbeat666
Senior tranceaddict

Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Helsinki, Finland
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Mar-08-2004 17:25
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Tranc3
tranceaddict in training

Registered: May 2002
Location: Santa Cruz, CA, US
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Nice bassline, first thing that stood out to me. Eq'ed nicely as well. Ahh sick you used congas! I love tribal elements.
Vocals seem to be carrying the track from around 1:40 to 2:15, which is not a good thing imo...makes the instrumentals seem too repetitive if the only real variation is in the vocals. Try moving the bassline up a half-octave to an octave once, should help out there.
Not really digging the synth that comes in at 2:54, it just reminds me of something/someone that's too needy. Just the feeling I get.
Piano needs more 'verb, doesn't really stand out...it's more of a background element.
Not really digging the section with the breakbeat either, that lead synth has gotten annoying by this point.
It's produced well though, and it's definitely unique, which are two of the three things I look for in tracks. Good job dude.
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Mar-10-2004 05:53
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Sean Walsh
JAGERMAESTRO
Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Downtown Vancouver
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Pretty nice stuff dude, I like it. Some comments:
-Bass and kick are really good. Percs are pretty good too, I like the bongoes and the percy fills.
-Vocal use could have been more creative IMO, I don't like the way it sounds at 2:05ish, you should save the end part of the vocal for later.
-Lead sound is pretty nice too, I like it.
-Bass pad is really needed in the breakdown, just sounds too thin without one in there IMO.
-Not really a big fan of the way it drops into the main riff/lead at 5:30ish, though the main lead is pretty sweet sounding.
Overall this is quite well produced and well done in general. I look forward to hearing more of your stuff.
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Mar-12-2004 22:45
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