Hi, just kinda done a bit of a tune and was after a bit of constructive criticism!

I haven't spent long on it and think it needs fills and fx to give it a 'fuller' more varied sound. It is one of the first things that I've done! Any help would be appreciated!

thanks in advance,
Rich

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let me geuss, fruity loops? ;D
its nice really, all u need to work on IMO is the mastering, it can be a good track
u need to raise the kick volume, and make the whole a little more trebly
good stuff, keep up the good work

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Originally posted by Dj-Gingi let me geuss, fruity loops? ;D its nice really, all u need to work on IMO is the mastering, it can be a good track u need to raise the kick volume, and make the whole a little more trebly good stuff, keep up the good work

YKTS, fruity

I haven't tried to master it or anything, I had t-rack but it seems to have dissapeared!

what u think about the bass, I think it sounds weak myself?

if u used t-racks to master the whole track u can raise the bass volume in the program too , so its all good
the whole song together is too quiet
so if u raise the master volume it would all sound fine

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Try mastering all midi and audio tracks to 24 bit wavs. Then open a new project, normalize all the tracks and add any effects you want extra to each track. Adjust the levels and finally mix back down into one mp3.

That is of coruse, if you can do all that with fruity, I only used it once and I didn't like it at all. I use Cusbase SX 2.

Darrax...

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