This must be one of my best tunes so far!

carl_b_-_untitled.mp3

Please give me constructive critisism!

Thanks alot!

- Carl B

Am downloading now, and will listen to and review later, after I've been to the pub.

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Nice fx at the beginning, tho I can hear distortion. Am liking the vocal sample, sets the scene.

Am liking the sound of this, very ambient. Like the way the drum beat came in then. Hi Hats sounds excellent. In fact Im really liking the way you bring the different percussional elements in. Nice Bass Lead type-thingy you got going there in the background.

Main melody's ok

The production on this track is very good, tho its not my personal sound. Prefer something a bit more energetic, with a bigger build up.

Gud stuff tho.

What you using?

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Originally posted by ManTrance Nice fx at the beginning, tho I can hear distortion. Am liking the vocal sample, sets the scene. Am liking the sound of this, very ambient. Like the way the drum beat came in then. Hi Hats sounds excellent. In fact Im really liking the way you bring the different percussional elements in. Nice Bass Lead type-thingy you got going there in the background. Main melody's ok The production on this track is very good, tho its not my personal sound. Prefer something a bit more energetic, with a bigger build up. Gud stuff tho. What you using?

Thanks alot!

I'm using FL Studio with albino, atmosphere, tau2, z3ta and some more...

- Carl B

Okay, here we go.

Nice intro, cool pad sounds, kick and bassline works well also. The snare/clap is a bit strong, but that's cool, it ads a bit of intensity.

Nice progression for the intro also, I like the way everything is flowing. At the end of the breadown, a little bit of a build would have been nice to bring it all back in.

Overall sounds is quite nice, a littel bit weak but it suits the style. I don't really have much else to say, but nice work. Not much bad to say about this one, as its not really my style of trance.

Keep it up mate

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Originally posted by hey cheggy Okay, here we go. Nice intro, cool pad sounds, kick and bassline works well also. The snare/clap is a bit strong, but that's cool, it ads a bit of intensity. Nice progression for the intro also, I like the way everything is flowing. At the end of the breadown, a little bit of a build would have been nice to bring it all back in. Overall sounds is quite nice, a littel bit weak but it suits the style. I don't really have much else to say, but nice work. Not much bad to say about this one, as its not really my style of trance. Keep it up mate

Thanks for your comments!