just finished the first draft of my 2nd tune off the album i am working on. let me know what you think, any feedback would be great =)
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Last edited by capricorn15 on Jun-01-2004 at 12:03

fixed the link =)
anyone have any feedback thnx =)

awesome work hadi. this is some of the most unique material i've heard. really relaxing and deep.

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Nice...very nice!

First, nice bassline, really moving.

I like the beat alot, nice executed, but in my opionion they are abit to loud, takes over to much of the melodies. Perhaps to lower the volume on the hi-hats and percs. I wouldnt claim to know how to make good beats but like I said, I think they are too loud. Just a tad

now to what I really like. The break 5 min and uptil around 8 mins...its really uplifting, inspirational in lack of other words. It´s like when the hero in the movie has just realized his true powers and slowly rises to the occation. This feeling drops after 8 mins but that's ok. It works anyways. Im not to happy about the chugga-chugga-chugga-chugga style on the ride/cymbalhit/scratch or whatever it is.

But all and all, excellent track!

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nice stuff
kinda ulrich schnauss style
don't think the beat fits with the track that much, would rather go for a downtempo beat or atleast something more ambient, cause this isn't exactly a dancefloor track hehe.
it's a bit long too, but good tune

keep it up

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i agree with Haak here, that the style of the track leans toward a more ambient..kind of chill-out style, so a less harsh beat might help here...but it sounds as if it'd be great to start a set off with

no need to use an Airwave-style kind of beat where there is bass on relaxing parts...something downtempo and chill-out would make this track better imho

other than that this is good work man

Like i said on MSN -

This is really sweet . After a second listen i think you need a different beat as the others said. With all the shiat i like it .

Great peace of work!

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