sounds good, i don't like the melody in the breakdown, however
wait... is your breakdown like 2 minutes long?? i don't follow hard trance THAT much but 2 minutes seem a little excessive for a genre that's very reliant on a pounding beat
your bass needs to be filled out, add a couple synths that compliment the bass... it's not very easy to hear right now
woah this awsome! Break starts way too early imo, should there even be a break? specially one this melodic... i think maybe it should be cut shorter and introduced more smoothly. i like melody tho, really cool. its a nice hybrid of melodic and hard trance. really well produced as well. keep it up man.