this is really nice

especially that one synth... really think it sounds bad ass around 2:30 or so

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wow i like the notes of the bass with the song
very emotional trance
u gotta make kick louder
synth is pretty good, nice distortion u put on it

now theres another synth
melody is killer
very oldschool trance, thats right! im feelin it!!!!
mmmm really into this now
good work m8
congrats

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thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it


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i love that 303 main lead, sounds amazing. great melody too.

unfortunately the track does not have much drive.. the percussion is too simple and a lot happens in the synth area, while the lower regions sound empty.

there is loads of potential. i adore your sounds and effects, but the track lacks energy at the moment.

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Yeah, purevolume is a good site!!

Oh, I simply love the way you have arranged this track. Nice melody as well, but I'm not a fan of that bass-sound...

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do you mean bassline composing or did I cut too much off the low end ?

Rather nice. the bassline is nice but I find it alittle too mid.

The breakdown melody is rather nice but I feel that more effect will be nicer.. Give it more drive, mate!

Cool stuff u got there. Cheers!

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Very class trance, your melody is emotional, your synth lead (with distortion) is very good, but I find your drums poor : add some other rythmics, with balance effect or reverb...

cheers d-miurge

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Originally posted by d-miurge Very class trance, your melody is emotional, your synth lead (with distortion) is very good, but I find your drums poor : add some other rythmics, with balance effect or reverb... cheers d-miurge

the drums, maybe I should add some other loops...

Trancevision

kickdrum is not nice at all, its something i have problems with too. nice melody and synth. not really liking that sub-bass, maybe a malstrom style bass might sound better and cleaner.

when it kicks in there's no energy, i also had this problem with my first tune. i learned since that percussion is the answer, use it more, it really hads so much to a tune even thou you would'nt think it at first.

keep it up

melody coming in at 2:16 is great, much better than the one just before [1:06]. overall the tune is really nice, the ideas are excellent but sonically two areas need more layers; the bassline and the percussion.