As I listen...

Sounding good...tis slightly electro though could be confused for hard trance if it were a bit faster. Dont like that synth that plays on 0:42, sounds dry, same for the one on 1:08.

It all breaks down to suddenly with no warning. Build the tension and then break it down with a burst of effects.

With the exception of those synths I mentioned it sounds really nice when it's all up and running. Around 5:10, sounds great. Just needs better structuring and some improved sounds.

I liked it, cos it's different. It's good to try something original, ask a certain Mr Corsten

Keep it up!

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Raver Baby Sy
www.simonvoakes.co.uk

Latest Tune:
Trance :: SV Digital - One Day Soon

whoa, this is cool

grundgy and dirty. I like this...

i think you should have started off a little softer and then introduced the break so it would give a little variation.

overall a good track, doesn't even need a lead or anything to keep my interest

i've just come out with a song of similar style, if you can return the favor and review it:

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=211098

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Oops i produce dubstep now.

NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

Thanx guys!

Cool u liked it
A softer begining of the track, like that. Will definitly do something about it!
When it comes to the softsynths. I could put some compressor on the first one, but other wise I like it myself

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