Quality tune guy, hypnotic sounds...
Your drums are good, except the hihat (coming a 1.25).
I love the pad and the bassline, housy and dark, I like it !
Edit : the toms are like in Satoshi Tommie "love in traffic"
Oct-01-2004 07:10
Jakhira
Ridiculously meticulous
Registered: May 2003
Location: Lebbeke, Belgium
Really nice tune.
The kick seems to be unhearable after a while though.
And the guitar reminds me of Flashdance
Oct-01-2004 09:35
TOR
Traveller
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Bruges, Belgium
positive:
- lovely pad in the beginning
- great kick
- nice atmosphere
negative:
- it's too fast
- you need more tribal elements in the first two minutes
- the instrument that comes in at 2:25 is too loud and drowns the other elements.
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Oct-01-2004 09:46
Jakhira
Ridiculously meticulous
Registered: May 2003
Location: Lebbeke, Belgium
I agree that it's too fast, bring it down to about 128 bpm
Oct-01-2004 09:49
eulerfx
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Boulder, USA
cool thanks. I totally agree with your comments!
That instrument at 2:25 is actually a tweaked Vanguard synth and the melody has a bassline, so I had to remove the bassline that was there to put in the Vanguagrd, but I didn't have time to make it all smooth and stuff...
Now that I listen to it more, I definatly want to make the guitar hook louder, make it slower, and add some chord progression to those pads after the break down...I'll play around with it and see where it goes.
