Originally posted by truetrance
if u played this in a club heads would be turned
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Arrogance will lead you no where around here…
Now about the tune, not a bad try... although the whole thing sounds kind of amateurish. First the bassline, a simple off beat bass just isn’t enough in those kind of tunes, it also makes the tune sound monotonous and flat. The acidlines are pretty nice but just aren't enough to make the track sound full…and again you just keep using the same sound from start to finish, very repetitive…
1:40 – that white noise at the background sounds really bad.
Overall, work on your sound quality and try making your tune more variable by adding some new elements and effects.
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Oct-04-2004 00:23
thoughtlessjex
Yakkity Yak
Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
It's pretty boring. It could use a lot more atmosphere throughout. You have an interesting concept, but you're not bringing it to its full potential.
Try harder next time.
Oct-04-2004 00:41
RiCo
500+ HP Supra club member
Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Somewhere
What do you mean OUR? Is it more than you? Well, you guys need to work a lot, because the track is really horrible and amateurish.
Oct-04-2004 02:16
Tranc3
tranceaddict in training
Registered: May 2002
Location: Santa Cruz, CA, US
Kick is nowhere near strong enough for a psy track.
The delayed bassline would be better if it was just sequenced in instead of hearing artifacts of the main bass.
The offbeat bassline would go over horribly in today's psy world.
Individual sounds need more work.
Track is nowhere near long enough for a normal psy-track.
Track itself never really goes anywhere, it's just a bunch of ideas thrown together.
Oct-04-2004 02:40
alexpea
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Mosjøen, Norway
Crap production. I could have made this one in exactly 7 minutes and 3 seconds. The bassline is lousy, imo.
You have alot of producing-hours ahead of you to reach a level that sounds average... This was under average, imo. Sorry...
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Oct-04-2004 11:39
RiCo
500+ HP Supra club member
Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Somewhere
Yep...couldn't have said it better myself. I really suck at producing but it wouldn't sound that bad even if I tried.
Oct-04-2004 17:11
Nukz
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Londonderry
if u played this in a club heads would be turned
lol?
Oct-04-2004 18:05
Ajay
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2003
Location: Londonderry, N.Ireland
turned in what way?
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Oct-11-2004 18:10
skanuga
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: ATL
BE NICE PPL!!!!
GIVE THEM SOME SUPPORT
AT LEAST THAT'S WHAT WE DO IN THE PSY SCENE!!!!
THE LINK DOESN'T EVEN WORK FOR ME BUT FROM OTHER REVIES I GUESS YOU HAVE LOTS TO WORK ON.
BOM!
Oct-12-2004 21:38
Ste
Planet Zogg Addict
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Outer Dementia
link doesnt work.
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