Hi,
I just joined this great site and wouldn't mind some critique on a track I did last summer.
Trance is something I'm still experimenting with as I've been writing mainly electro rock/pop stuff these last few years.

Sorry it's a biggie


thanx in advance....Faith (original mix)

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Nice buildup ... rock trance is summin i've never heard before, lol. It's experimental at it's best imo, this is a beautifully produced tune. The bass line is really phat an rocky ... snare seems to be similar to the 80's drum machines, fits the tune perfectly. Vocals are the icing on the cake. Love it.

--joey

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

quality rox
loooooove the bass, very clubby, energetic
the vocals i dunno about :S sounds a little too eurodance to be honest,
besides that, the vocals are too quiet
maybe make kick stronger, but the best part is the bass i must say :P
nice attempts on the vocals...

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this is pretty decent like

the vocals are a bit cheesy like, either make them louder and give them a bit more hi-end or just drop them

the tune seems a bit basic, the percs + bass are excellent, but the main synth just doesn't do enough and the vocals are too quiet to really add to the tune imo, i'm sure u could make it really good now, if you do remake it, be sure to let us know!

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Hey thanx guys...

Always nice to get feedback from people that know what they are talking about

Glad y'all like the base, it's actually three base sounds interacting with each other, and all z3ta....my fave softy.

later

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Anyone else wanna comment before it rolls off the board into obscurity?

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