hey mates,

i just would like to show you my new track, which hasn't got a name yet, anyway, i hope you will like this one,

[link removed, sorry]

comments, suggestions always appreciated,

thanks for listening to my music,

Peter

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Last edited by Mycron on Nov-19-2004 at 07:57

i think this is the one from msn???

i really can't give an honest answer atm, i can't even hear very well, i have the flu (plus sinus cold, or whatever).

i love the melody, etc. sounds like it could use a bit more oomph on the low end, but that's a norm for u pete

get working on eternal bliss 2 u nut!

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Well a another nice melodic tune from you Peter. Can't wait to hear the final "full" version.

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Really nice melody.

Definedly could have some more low end.

And maybe some more percussion.

woow! sounds really nice!

I like the bassline and the choir!

maybe you can add some more percussion to fill things up.

wow, piano! and a saw kinded synth :d

damn damn damn nice

maybe you could replace the main synth with a distorted guitar? just an idea

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Wow, very full of energy

As always, great atmosphere! Even though not as good as your previous ones.
As mentioned, the low end could use some more.
Great melody, lovely piano

I find it relaxing, yet full of energy. I like it a lot


Keep up the good work!

Hi Pete

Deffo needs more low, its really un-bassy. Nice Piano. its generally good (dislike the closed hats, they sound really out of place) All it needs is more ooomph on the low

cheers

Alex

Hey Peter,

I don't wanna be critical as usual, but there a few things to rethink about the track, but firstly what I really like about this track:
- it is driving
- pads are great including the choir
- EQing is getting professional
- nice effects overally track, this is what I also should learn how to produce those

What you should rethink:
- The pluck notes, you should work a bit on the melody
- the piano melody

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hi Pete,
very good track m8, i like the melodies... such as finart says, i don't like the piano... delete it or change the melody of it. i love these choirs! the synths are good.
btw when do you think we can finish our remix

cheers
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great percussions, good melody and the mastering sounds fine... the melody isnt my cup of tea.. but productions wise very good..

lose the piano.. quite frankly is sounds horrible on its own.. the break is good.. and I can actually hear ur style mate.. definitely in the same vain as Lost Emotions.. u have gotten more punch in the takeoff.. than u usually got

good work!

8/10

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Sounds good to me mate, I like the overall sound.

I'm not too much for those synths with quite some resonance on it, though that's personal. They sound too 'thin' for me.
I think you can perhaps work a bit more on the melody of the pluck synth, as Steve says.
Bass needs a bit more oomph, try to compress or eq it a bit more and it's done.
Piano is a bit less for the overall sound of the track, I think it might sound just as good if you replace it by something else.

Looking forward to the finished one

Cheers,
Wim

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Hi mate, another really uplifting tune
The panned hats stand out as being much louder than the rest, with the result of losing some low-end and burying the melody a little. I can hardly hear the bassline.
The tune sounds really great and the vibe is excellent; a little attention to the mixing should make this one sound really sweet.

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