*listening*
intro could be softer...
sound quality is good, although it sounds a bit thin, imo...
some very nice elements in it...
guitar an octacve higher would sound better, i guess...
melodies are great...

overall good production...think about the things i´ve mentioned...just some suggestions...

Hi,

this is a nice driving melodic trancer! you guys did a great job building intensity throughout the tune. The synth melodies are really sweet!

I'm not so sure about the guitar melody.. its a litte random. Its almost like two different melodies spliced together... two halves that don't flow together.. dunno, hope that helps a little bit!

good stuff all around though.

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Good drive, cool melodies overall. The guitar does not sound too bad to me. As somebody mentioned, sounds a little fine, need to add some lows to it.
Is there an extended club mix of this by any chance, if so would like to listen to it. Sending you a PM.

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