My full tune of the one I recently posted. It's heavy prog, bangin, melodic somewhat, I dont really know how to classify this. Structurally I believe it's finished, but theres still a lot of maintenence I have to do.

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It's the only tune in there.

I'm posting this for feedback, so any helpful suggestions and comments would be amazing. Thanks

(Oh and it's not mastered or anything, I don't know how to do that,so I found it sounds best with headphones [or maybe my speakers just suck]}

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Last edited by Trazedict on Nov-28-2004 at 06:27

hey m8
if i can be honest here :O
the bass sounds like its from 1985 movies lol, for example beverly hills cop lol, need less reverb on that, less unison (if there is any) and make it quieter, more sharper with equalizer, and some more percs u need, the synth is just sounding like subtractor all over it, so keep practicing m8, ull get there soon

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lol i know it was shitty. long story short, i had to use that temporarily while i worked on the other elements. fixed it now that you reminded me
more percs will be coming to. thanks for the help

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Calm and smooth out that bass! Might want to lower the really high eq (10k-12k+) on the hats a little, and work out the sound on the synth. I like the breakdown, thats badass.

bump

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listening on headphones.

0.37 introduce this synth with a filter maybe? better buildup effect.

0.59 i expected some bass tbh, something that would made the beat go \o/

perc seems alot, you add some reversed cymbal to the layers, don't like it.

hmm it's to much of the same, i think you just started with producing?

What you need is a clear funky bass, something that makes your head goes up and down. Arrangment need some work also, there were sudden stops sometimes that introduce something new, or introducing stuff to sudden.
Like Sun said, keep practicing .

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