Hi,

OK, this isn't really my fav style of music, but here are my thoughts:

the whole tune is quite basic, I think you need to add variation to your melodies, as each synth seems to follow the same pattern.
I think you need to add some effects, delay & reverb for example, to try fatten your sounds and add depth, and also try boost your perc levels.

Hope some of that makes sense!
Keep it up

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hey guys :P
first off, the beginning when u use the pitch device its not sounding so well, its kinda like mario brothers lol
at 42 seconds the note of the bass is off as well, and as sooper said, its overall a really basic track, but thats ok i can tell u just started
so keep practicing guys maybe ull be the next kyau vs albert?
keep posting tracks here, so u can see things to fix, it really helps , hear u later

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