Not a bad track. It does need to be mixed again though. Things are getting lost in all the high freqs you have going. Also, might think about replacing that snare drum. Good job.

- some nice fx!
- that braek at 0:30 is way too sudden
- the strings are nice. very spooky, work well with that TS303
- again the beat comes too suddenly
- i like those razor synth sweeps
- add some 4/4 hi-hats or something that does the same thing...
- synths (and bass) are a bit too 'phat' and poignant so maybe add a calmer, softer sound here and there.
- melodies are pretty good

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very nice concepts... great melodywise, but you need to do something about the mixing...


also, try to work on some more compression, make things more tighter and it could be a very nice banging amazing track...

i enjoyed

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Originally posted by eulerfx - that braek at 0:30 is way too sudden - again the beat comes too suddenly

yeah it sort of came out that way when i shortened the track... at first i didnt think it sounded so bad but you know when you listen to it again you can hear differences...

if you want to hear the full version... you can listen to this and skip to 1:23:30 Harmony Network

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