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kickass dude.. instantly gonna check this out.. and let you know in person how I liked it

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Never been a big fan of techno but this is def sounding pretty cool keep up the good work

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Intro's kinda weird. O_o

I'm okay with a little repetition, but there's just a little too much of it in the intro.

When are we gonna get back to the beat? The breakdown goes on forever.

I must say, I'm not much a fan of the tech house style you're employing. It would have been cool if you could have at least included the awesome bassline from the original.

i dont have a bassline becuase i couldnt match the original
but i did fix out the annoying breakdown

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ive done some more work on the tune, i hope more of you check it out!

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Originally posted by dj_lane Download: Shpongle - Dorset Perception (Lane Pelovsky's Glitch Virus Remix) (Edit 5.0-7.0) Let me know your thoughts -Lane **update** Ive done a bit more work on the track, added a new bassline, and made it more fluid... Edit 7.0 is up with 160k quality!

I am a HUGE shpongle fan, so I jumped at the chance to check this version out. Dorset Perception actually being one of my favs

OK, listening:

hmmm interesting! wow, this is truely a bizaar version.


0:20 I love the bass line.

0:40 that intial cymbol is very overpowering.

0:50 yup teh cymbol works better with another HH.

Im not sure about the vocals being chopped up like that.

1:19 --> 1:45 that sample is too repetative.

1:50 I love that sample.

2:30 kewl, nice mixing.

4:40 interesting bits & peices

You are driving this tune with the vocal samples. Have you thought about sampling some of the guitar licks of Dorset Perception & adding them to the tune. (just an idea)

I love the bass line of this tune. The bassline truely kicks ass! The samples get a little annoying in parts of the song. I think another rythme needs to be added & reduce the amount to samples in the song.

Thanks for sharing dj_lane

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Decided to check out what you might have done to a Shpongle track.

Just some things I didn't like of the song: The kick would sound really bad coming in to a transition. It's just a double beat. There's not much of the original in this song either. I think there should be maybe more of the melody, such as the guitar riff or more clear of vocals. It's just too repetitive for my liking. Good try.

-Steve

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nice techno... sounds a bit dry... try using some Adam Beyer tracks as references and try some of the effects he's using... like try wetting your sounds in a small room reverb.. or adding a slight delay echo on some of your sounds.

Also wanna make your techno beat has phat bass... take any drumloop low pass filter it really low like 100hz or lower... till all you feel is the bass... then boost some resonance so you feel more bass... it gives you that deep techno percussion bass. This trick is common in european techno.

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Originally posted by Xenocreator_PG_ You are driving this tune with the vocal samples. Have you thought about sampling some of the guitar licks of Dorset Perception & adding them to the tune. (just an idea) I love the bass line of this tune. The bassline truely kicks ass! The samples get a little annoying in parts of the song. I think another rythme needs to be added & reduce the amount to samples in the song.

Thanks So much for the feedback, unfortunatly i cant get a good enough cut of the guitar, so i couldnt add it, but thanks for the suggestion, i need to work on some more actions and samples going on so it is more enjoyable.

Although techno is mostly repitition, there should be a change in sounds often for it to be enjoyable

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Originally posted by Steven Hays The kick would sound really bad coming in to a transition. It's just a double beat.

Actually, the beat isnt a double beat, its an illusion, it has a bassless crunch before the kick, it mixes quite well with other techno

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Originally posted by Steven Hays There's not much of the original in this song either. I think there should be maybe more of the melody, such as the guitar riff or more clear of vocals. It's just too repetitive for my liking. Good try.

I need to work on it so it has the same sound, but has a variety, that is my biggest fault is that i dont change this around too much.

As for the guitar riff, its a bit hard to sample that as it includes a load of bass from sasha's edit

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Originally posted by gerrycueto nice techno... sounds a bit dry... try using some Adam Beyer tracks as references and try some of the effects he's using...

Funny you should say that i sampled a few sounds from Adam Beyer's remix of Ben Sims - Manipulated the crunch sound before the beat is an example

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Originally posted by gerrycueto like try wetting your sounds in a small room reverb.. or adding a slight delay echo on some of your sounds. Also wanna make your techno beat has phat bass... take any drumloop low pass filter it really low like 100hz or lower... till all you feel is the bass... then boost some resonance so you feel more bass... it gives you that deep techno percussion bass. This trick is common in european techno.

Thanks for the tips on that about techno, i need to do that, i notice that technique` in techno, just didnt know what it was

Overall, thanks so much for the feedback, more edits are on the way!

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I'm sorry, but there is hardly any coherent rythym to that. Not only that, but it houses almost no musical variation whatsoever. Have you ever listened to the original? It is quite dandy. Sasha's remix is crap, as well. Try again....

Big fan of Shpongle here, so this should be interesting.
I´m not going to complain about repetitiveness, because it´s a techno remix. The break does feel a bit long though.

I don´t really listen to techno, so i don´t know what to say, except that i would have liked some more content from the original version.