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2:16 to 3:16

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Last edited by colibri on Jan-28-2005 at 02:16

hey man

IM me, Alt + F4 was a big tune for me, im curious

Dinaire Force 1 is my aim

Wow, I'm really enjoying this! I would have done the intro and outro a little bit differently, maybe more progressively, something softer fading into the drum. But that's just me being anal, so please don't listen to a word that I say.

It's definitely first class!

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i really like it...its a nice change from the original

I have heard some of your previous productions, I see improvement and you are definetly getting better.

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thanks for the replies

hey, this remix sounds pretty good... there were some things that were good and some things that could be worked on...

first of all... i'd like to say that your overall sound is pretty good. each on of the instruments you used is very dymnamic. your mastering is pretty good as well. kick sounds very full.... and hi hats/percussion stands out enough like it needs to be.

couple of things that i think you could work on... make the percussion more interesting... it sounds too much like a track from 1998, with the long kick rolls, and the simple hi hat pattern. add more different types of percussion in, there is just not enough. secondly, make and use more sound effects. having things sweeping in, or hitting and echoing off. get creative with some simple sounds (percussion, pre-made effects, samples etc.) and try to use your program to make crazy effects. also your transitions from part to part are a bit rough. it is a tech mix so it doesn't necessarily have to be as smooth or flow as nice, but some of the transitions just seem a little abrubt. another thing to try is to let some parts build and progress. the structure of the track could be rearranged differently and built a little bit better.

overall i'd say pluses are the fullness of the sounds and instruments, the mastering, and i liked how you introduced the main lead(its a really nice instrument u used). minuses, it sounds too much like pre 2000. long drum rolls, simple percussion, no sound effects. hope some of my comments helped..



p.s. what program are u useing to produce, and also if u did master or do any compression, what did u use to do that with?

first of all, good work. its a decent mix... not really playable, but there is def. potential... like hai lee mentioned above, the beat sounds too plain... sorta like oldschool trance kick drums.. fuck around with some more percussion and the bassline could be done differently but its not too bad.. what i didnt like much was the breakdown and the drop... there isnt much suspense and the drop is a bit weak... no surprises really. overall feel of the track was impressive tho, i liked your approach.. i can see you making some proper stuff in like a year or 2. keep it up ~

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Jeez, now I am scared to ever post a track on here of my own.

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Originally posted by ZzZ The Goddess Jeez, now I am scared to ever post a track on here of my own.

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RHODE KILL 2 @ THE RANCH [RI] -18/19/20 July 2008
WEBSITE-MYSPACE-[email protected]