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the melody around 0:13 is too try imo, wouldnt mind more delay on that, too dry-reeverb?

main lead is ok

not really digging the sub melody(?) @ 1:44--sounds alittle to amaturish too dry and too loud..

around 2:17, dont like it

nice try tho

keep it up dude!

rj / space pirate

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it's okay. i don't really dig the part mentioned above. add some reverb. the ambience is nice. are you by any chance using a microkorg? all in all, not too bad, just spice it up.

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Originally posted by chillsonic it's okay. i don't really dig the part mentioned above. add some reverb. the ambience is nice. are you by any chance using a microkorg? all in all, not too bad, just spice it up.

No i didnt use microkorg i mainly used Z3ta & Moog Modular

Anyway thanks for the comments will improve upon right away

did anyone mentioned saws?
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k i'll give ya an idea, when you put in "re", put identical one on 1st octave higher, and repeat the step again (3 in total)

add delay and reverb, so, that it sounds identical in both left and right channel, yet, different delay property. (making the note lenght shorter and longer will also do the trick)

i am not sure, but each of the one (in the channel) suppose to sound an echo of 3 or 4 dunno.

u need to work on it, i want to hear it in 6 months

hmm, doesnt seem to do anything.

the sounds are very basic, get some decent plug ins, it didnt sound to me like you used z3ta.

go to kvr and have a look at some of the synths on there, there are some good free ones available.

there isnt any structure to this tune either.

listen to some well produced trance tracks, write down where things come in, like hats, basslines, melodies. see how other tracks build.