melody is boring!

and you have to work on your percs. I can only hear kick, clap and an ohihat:-( maybe it was just the stream. Bass was good and pulsing, maybe add one bass more or something.

listening now....

liking the filtered riffs, good buildup. Kick definitely needs some more volume. Can barely hear it. Ace melody(ies) though, definitely bring that kick forward more/possibly turn the leads down a touch. Other than that, good sound happening here. Good flow to the tune.

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Thanks for the feedback guys! much appreciated.

please check out this version http://www.fatnsassymastering.com/i...smmp3020605.mp3

and tell me how it compares with the first. It was mastered slightly differently. love to know what you think!

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Last edited by tecnolover on Feb-08-2005 at 00:14

I like this! Coming from a clubber, not a producer, I think this is epic, euphoric, exciting - nice work!

I like the second version, very clean and the kicks sound better, maybe just a tad bit more compression and your set, or raise the lower freqs a tad.

Overall though the concept of the song is good, the riffs are awesome and they don't lack variety. Good job mate.

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Originally posted by Jigglypufffff I like this! Coming from a clubber, not a producer, I think this is epic, euphoric, exciting - nice work!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. It actually gets my foot thumping also

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Originally posted by DjPyster I like the second version, very clean and the kicks sound better, maybe just a tad bit more compression and your set, or raise the lower freqs a tad. Overall though the concept of the song is good, the riffs are awesome and they don't lack variety. Good job mate.

Yeh, the second version was mastered professionally and is also at encoded at 256kbps so it should sound better naturally. The first version was mastered by myself in 128kbps which created some 'clicky' sounding artifacts on the lead synth which bugs me. The 44/16 .wav doesn't have that so it's something in the mp3 encoding bitrate that does that. Thanks for the feedback!

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Sorry about that, the second link is now working.

thnx.

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