c'mon people we would really like ome feedback on this one

first of all.. try to find a webspace so you can post direct links instead of yousendit.... i dunno... it just gets a bit annoying having to wait 15 seconds to download and what not...

anyways, this track is very driving... has a lot of power... I was gonna comment about the mastering but just noticed it was 96kbs and that's why the quality sounds so poor... kinda hard to comment on the quality and mastering so i'll leave that as it is...

the melody is very powerful... the arranging is great... this is a real club stomper I could imagine (in a higher quality version)... not the most original sounding tune but definately a banging tune..

Great job making a stomper of a tune.

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first of all.. try to find a webspace so you can post direct links instead of yousendit.... i dunno... it just gets a bit annoying having to wait 15 seconds to download and what not...

(you can also press the "here" in click here if your download doesnt start. youll get the file immediatly..

but to robin our styles are kinda the same indeed!
sweet break btw, but you should upload a higher bitrate version..
sounds to lo-fi now,
5:48 nice filterwork
strong build up climax, very good
maybe you should try to make the melody sound a bit more alive, after hearing it 15 times in a row I kinda lose my attention.. just add a little spice here and there to make it come back in again
overall really well produced

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quality is shit...
song is fuck'n awsome...production/structure skills are amazing
tons of energy....and build up in the 6:30 range is wicked.
High Qua tune could definetley go somewhere!
good job

( what do you use if you don't mind me asking? )

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Nicw tack. I really dig the style your producing here. Very driving although I think the melody could peak a bit more. Some tech trance does and some doesnt, this feels like it falls in the latter category.

The mastering needs some work still. More eq boosts in the mids and highs I think would help.

Good work, keep it up!

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- sounds nice and clean, but there is nothing really unique going on
- add some interesting sfx, or production tricks too add variation, as it gets quite repetitive
- build up at ~6:30 is nice and works fine, though maybe you should try adding something more interesting within, like some sfx.

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thnx for the feedback people i'm working on a second edit will be up soon, Mr Rogers, i'm using fruityloops.

I uploaded an update, a darker more techno like track tell me what y'all think


link:
http://s18.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...94348BZK5P1RLSK

hope'you like it better this way

Excellent stuff, liking both the versions... nice techy sound to them, well produced. Very nice driving tune that would work well in one of my sets.

The production's still a little bit rough but it's good enough for me!

9/10

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = I'd play it)

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ok then, thanks Stu...any other suggestions on our track?

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