Decided to try and make a deep & dark tech tune. I'm still on amateur level in Fruityloops.
I'm in need of criticizm here..help is appreciated!
(Btw, it's the very first time I'm adding "vocals", so don't bash my head in for those..)


http://s22.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...RL2PNPIPEQ406SB

Believe me, you will be bashed for EVERYTHING...it is a TA custom! =oP
I will check it right now and let you know!

Uhoh, that didn't sound good. I thought that was the trance.nu way? Yaya, I guess I'll have to take what's coming..thanks for the warning, replying and listening

Dont listen to him.. he's just pissed cos he's in the army and not chillin by the pool like the rest of us civvy's

Your tracks not bad. The kick sounds good and you have created a very dark vibe. Even though its tech, I think you could add more of a sense of progression to it. Small buildups or more signifigant chages throughout it, could help to keep things interesting.

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Originally posted by Axolotyl Dont listen to him.. he's just pissed cos he's in the army and not chillin by the pool like the rest of us civvy's Your tracks not bad. The kick sounds good and you have created a very dark vibe. Even though its tech, I think you could add more of a sense of progression to it. Small buildups or more signifigant chages throughout it, could help to keep things interesting.

Yeah, I get what you're saying. Thanks for listening, I'll be sure to look into it