Here is a tune i have been working on lately.. This is my first complete tune.. It is not perfect but overall i like it. Any comments is always greatly appreciated!


Voiz - Exploring Subconscious (Complete Version)



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Last edited by djvoiz on Jun-26-2005 at 15:21

Hey Voiz!

Your link isn't valid!

Here is the right link...CLICK THIS!

The only problem now, is that the host site is SOOOOOO SLOOOOOW I couldnt download more than 4 seconds of it!
PM me when you get this resolved, and I'll be sure to give it a boo!

Later man!

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I... "third" (be it?) that about the host. Though, actually I've somehow managed to download it, but that's because my comp is online almost 24/7... Well, pretty good track there. I like the dark and menacing feel to it. Goes right with the track title. As for the critique: kinda felt "off the groove" at the first moments where the break-style rhytm come in, but maybe that's how it was supposed to be... dunno.

it must be a temporary problem because it is usually more like 80k/sec..

I'll try to correct the situation.

Thanks for your comments InnerLights..

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Ok, the link works now.. i hosted it directly on my website!

Enjoy

Voiz - Exploring Subconscious (Complete Version)

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The overdrive on your kick is a little heavy. Not sure if you wanted that.

That was an interesting development at 3:39

Mmm, I like the big, dark melody.

Good track. You handled the energy in it very originally.

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Hey

Lots of energy in this one. Nows after second drum roll made more mysterious with different energy. Very nice to my ears. I like the voice, how do you do that? The perc at 2:18 is not good. Remove that, I think it detracts from everything. Dark, edgy breakdown, nice. Hi hat, shaker thing is too loud here. Shit after that prolonged synth you'd expect the song to thrash out, what an anticlimax man, you have to fix that.

GL with it

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Originally posted by Tholius Hey Lots of energy in this one. Nows after second drum roll made more mysterious with different energy. Very nice to my ears. I like the voice, how do you do that? The perc at 2:18 is not good. Remove that, I think it detracts from everything. Dark, edgy breakdown, nice. Hi hat, shaker thing is too loud here. Shit after that prolonged synth you'd expect the song to thrash out, what an anticlimax man, you have to fix that. GL with it

Thanks for the comments and yes you are right about the part after the break down.. ill have to find a way to make it better.

What voice are you talking about?

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I was talking about the voice sounded fragmented at about 1:15... how you did that?

Or is that how it just came out as it was rendered when the choir coincided with the drum roll and arp to make it sound as if it was fragmented. On closer listening I think this is what happened, am I right?

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humm.. i couldnt say, sorry! :S

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nice drive, nice percussions and effects.. cool melody Green Martian style.. good style.. some minor quality and mixing issues.. could have added some more depth in it..

but it sounds like a descent tune

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Ok..link is back up so let's have at it.

The synth sounds are cool until that dirty fuzzy synth comes in and then distracts the ears.
Melody is a little plain. Percs are very loud after that break (as mentioned above I'd change that part).
That big build and CRASH seemed out of place with what comes after. It didnt seem like a climax. The percs are really not mixed well with the rest of the synths...they overpower the song and kind of detract from it after hearing this much now.
SOme great ideas and a good dark feeling to this track. Nice use of arps as background extras. INteresting sounds too.
Just not doing it for me though Voiz. The ending is solid.

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