I was only gonna just listen to this (with the pop-up player thing), but i just had to download it. It'll be on my playlist for a while too.
Can't offer alot in the way of constructive criticism really. I think maybe you overuse the pink noise and that rising/falling kinda engine startup sound (I've really gotta work on my musical vocab :P ), but otherwise this is a thoroughly enjoyable tune.
If you do some more work on this, could you post it up or pm me? I'd love to use it in a mix or two.
Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
There's a weird stop in the music early on in the track. It sounds to me like a CD skip. I tried to seek back to it but I couldn't find it. I dunno what it is.
Pretty good. I've gotta agree with bricky though on the white nose. Other than that, I don't have much to say about it.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: atoms are not things they are possibilities
I wouldnt really call this psytrance. Its far more prog than psy. Reminds me a bit of some of the stuff on J00F actually. Might want to consider sending it there if your considering labels.
Pretty damn good production wise. The structure is very progressive too which seems to work well. Theres some nice percussion elements woven throughout it too. Those bladerunner style pads are sensational and give the track a very dark feel.
I feel it gets a bit messy in the highs near the end though(around the 8 min mark)
Do you mind giving a rundown of the synths you used to create this? I'm curious... the programming is very well done =)
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Sep-08-2005 01:35
Blue Frequency
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Sep-08-2005 02:47
Sparkunian
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Dumanoupoli
Simple and pretty.
Soundtrack atmosphere.Good production but too mellow for my taste...
Nice work
Hi,
Productions sounds really sweet, I concur, this sound smore progressive than psy .
I like those kinda vangelis trump pads .
In overall, this is really good, I was expecting some more action but that's just me good work mate .
Kopi =o.
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Sep-08-2005 08:20
Mane
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Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Poland, Szczecin
hey mate, its been long time since i heard something from you
nice start, that clap at 50 s maybe you could add more mid, i like whole structure, for me its more psy than prog actually, i like fxs , and that "oh" at 4 min its great keep it up
psy / prog. doesnt really matter, its typical Danny C,
you've done alot more work on it since the last time you sent it to me,
Well done bro, keep churning them out
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Sep-08-2005 12:48
dannyc
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Registered: Aug 2004
Location: dublin, ireland
bricky: thanks for listening glad you liked the tune, this is completetly finished thou man, i'm not doing anymore work on this have moved onto my next project. the exessive use of white noise was intentional to create a certain atmosphere hence the reason i called it vapourise. if theres something in particular you would like me to change i could do you a special edit so you can stick it in your mixes
thoughtlessjex: thanks for feedback man
axolotyl: man thats fantastic that you felt this reminded you of joof stuff it just so happens i kinda got some inspiration froma great joof track LSG netherworld oliver prime remix you'll hear from this his over use of white noise which i loved
as far as the synths are concerned they're all reason 3 presets just worked them myself ya know. i'm only producing little over a year so my synth work has pro as i would like, that will take time i guess.
do you really think this could be good enough for joof? dont know if its psy enough for them. anyway i sent it of to them yesterday hope for the best.
any other labels you could suggest other than joof??
blue frequency: thanks mate
sparkunian: interesting you noticed the soundtrack type feel to it as this would be my other main musical influences. thanks mate
kopi_luwak: thanks for postive feedback
mane: glad you liked this i think we have similar taste, thanks for the tips also.
kaymak: my main man and fellow irish producer thanks for continued support and keep up the good work yourself, be seeing you soon
great response all in all was'nt expecting this hopefully joof will like it as much or another record label. i'm dying to get my first release to reach that milestone.
anyone else got any feedback on it????
Sep-09-2005 23:01
sterilis
Sunset Ibiza
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
very nice production. only fault is the shakers, they lean too much to the right which doesn't balance the track. the synths are superb just wondering what reason presets u used and what keyboard u r using?
Sep-09-2005 23:48
Axolotyl
hired goon
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: atoms are not things they are possibilities
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Originally posted by dannyc
do you really think this could be good enough for joof? dont know if its psy enough for them. anyway i sent it of to them yesterday hope for the best.
any other labels you could suggest other than joof??
Only one way to find out I guess...
Maybe try some psytrance progressive labels like Sinn Tec, Digital Structures or Spiral Trax too. Good luck mate =)