Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Kibbutz Gaash, home of all the light in Holyland
An MP3.com track by me..
Hello all!
I've recently uploaded a track I made called "Murky Fall".
It is available on http://www.mp3.com/oDrori and I'd be very thankful if you'll take a listen...
I know it has some flaws, but the more comments, the better
The quality seems ok, but the main leads creates distortion at 0:05. The melody is kinda smooth, since it's uplifting and dark. The weird sound effect goes way too loud at times. I don't know what happens at 2:20! The melody is unfitting there. Rating : 6.2/10
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Kibbutz Gaash, home of all the light in Holyland
Yes I've been recieving these comments py folks (including myself)...
The track IS too loud at points I did a pretty crappy work out of mastering it...
The structure's a bit inconventional cause I do better at constructing club than radio...
I will soon upload a9 min long track which is better IMO...
Major thanx for replying Club Zero, there's nothing I appreciate more than opins, honest once= best!
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Cairns Highlands, Atherton Tablelands
love the start but it drags on to long.
boy lots of work needed here some of it sounds like your playing
a late 80s computer game.
the mixing levels need lots of work.
take the reverb off the kick its set to far back in the mix
and some of your samples have no reverb at all which makes
them to up front in the mix.
whats that DB level doing?
sound like your just starting Producing, keep on trying
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Dec-24-2001 01:09
oDrori
howdy
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Kibbutz Gaash, home of all the light in Holyland
Thanx a lot for the comments, yes the DB level does suck major ass
It is my first full production, I have another one left and another one that I've just finished!
The second one's clubbier, but I can't decide:
Upload now, or wait a while and add vocals to it...?
An MP3.com track by me..
