checking, should be good as always

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Solid as always Romi. The build up seems a bit monotonous but the break and lead are really nice as usual. However after listening to Technological world I do have to wonder, is this new track a remix of Technological world? There is not much difference between the two tracks after the leadsections kick in. That is because you have used the same lead sound and probably also the melodies are pretty much placed in the same key. Most of the melodies in your tracks seem to be in the same key. You might want to vary that a little bit more. Even though the notation of your leads is different everytime , your leadsections do tend to sound a lot alike.

In this track I think it is nice that you have used is a bit of a faster lead compared to some of your other tracks, therefore the track has more energy. I think I prefer this track over Technological world but mate you are copying yourself here


Cheers!

Nomen nescio

Sounds very professional, and it also gives a positive feeling.
I think everything still needs some work, including the melody.
Great work, and good luck completing this piece.

Greets,
Synth

listening to the tune, the build up is indeed monotonous.

at 1:30 something the song stops in to a nice break. at maybe 2:14 the lead kicks in? at 2:30 the kick comes again and the lead sounds great! i cant critique the percs on this comp (inbuilt laptop speakers) wich suck but i guess they have the same standard as the rest of the song!


with more simply words, great tune!

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Thanks for the replies. Yeah, i've worked on it some more this evening, maybe tomorrow i will put the finished version online.

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updated version link!

http://www.filefarmer.com/Romi/TW/R...rvingTheSky.MP3

Still some things to sort out though, i think later today i will put up the final version, so stay tuned!

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now it is alot better! feel like some great euphoric!

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Originally posted by Nomen Nescio I think I prefer this track over Technological world but mate you are copying yourself here

i would have to dissagree a bit there. i would say the track shares some simularities but only within the style. why change a pretty original production style? i would possibly make the lead sound a bit more upfront for this one tho..

the melody is a lot more sophisticated compaired to technological world. as is the bassline.. i like the more long sounding notes to the bass on this one as well. i think a screaming powerful lead sound should complement the main lead at around 4;13 or just after the break.. maybe add to the energy a bit more..

nice stuff as always

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Thx again for the feedback.

Here you can listen to a full version (lq):

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=654010&t=2751

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great drive to begin with!

and you cut the build up down by a few mins it seems. really enjoying this. the whole thing sounds so much louder! the lead is cutting through so much more now. what do you apply to the final mixdown? do you have a mastering plugin or do you just add a final comp? also.... please can i have a version of this to play please

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Really nice well produced track... always makes me envious when I hear someone who can produce this well. Keep up the good work.

cheers
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