Damn u are improving urself alot!
I remember I listened to some of ur tracks some months ago and they were kinda amateur but this oen is beginignt o sou8nd really good .
I would fix the freqs in the 3000/5000 range with the lead, also try to play with the panoraics more mate .
I will not comment more until to listen the full finished version .
Good Work!
Kopi =o.

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THANKS ALEX SANDERS! I do need to play with pannings

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

I like it sounds...

need fade in for instruments(volume automation)....because now your track going,then suddenly starts synth or something......maybe main lead(somekind pluck) need some fat(a little bit) ...

Great work...this sounds trancy

Very nice, clear sounds in this one. I would cut some of the highest freq's if I where you, as they are kind of sharp to the ear. I'm digging the synth that comes in at about 40 secs. Very fresh. Let me know when its finnished!

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Nice vibe and energy you've got going here I'd definitely cut some of those high freqs, and perhaps lower the volume of, or widen into the stereo field, the fast arpeggio, it drowns out the nice guitar line slightly. The bassline is the groove. Nice work man, keep it up and finish it!

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Monsoon - Astrosurf

Thanks alot for the review. It is rather obvious my guitar is a little drowned out. But something about it gives me a vibe of liking it lol.

I kinda like the way the arps wraps around it, gives it a sense of it all being together hehe, either that or im completely insane

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

quite energic stuff, maybe needs a bit more clarity in the mixing ?

tempo is a bit too fast for my taste though

youve been improving as kopi said ! best is to come im sure

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