hi
I didn't like this that much sounds too.. much like chaos? I dunno
but keep it up. great that you're making minimal though. there should be more of it here

Thanks for the feedback.

I see your point yeah, so I don't know whether to take something out or alter any eq's on anything. Any advice on that? Does it sound fine and it just an eq or layers problem? Can't really tell from my own ears on my own track.

Thanks

first thing I noticed was how you start out, imo the first synth is a bit too simple.. but thats jus tthe style I guess.. then the voice kinda thing is really cool... I like how it changes as you progress through the track.. emm the kick should be a bit louder, not much.. you just have to make a bigger difference between the bass and the kick.. I think your going the right way with this youve improved alot in sounds since your last track! keep it up

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Just uploaded a new version as you've replied lol so I don't know which one you've heard :P.

Thanks for the feedback, The bass and kick difference I've changed a bit though depends on the version you listened too. The first synth is just an into element really and it is simple I agree .

Thanks for the advice, will take it on board

I can do you a midi soon mate yeah, not sure what comes in at 1;14 though because I didn't introduce anything there.

Any opinion on the track?

Again not sure which version you have though, the 1:17 or 1:47 length?

I'll have to change the tempo rise part because that wasnt entirely intentional in how its turned out. Thanks for pointing that out to me.

The sound your referring to is the inital bass sound you hear but I hae fucked around with it and gave it a little bit of a melody. Do you think I should include that more within the track then?

I probably will try and produce something revolving around that yeah, thanks for the tip.

Also I've had a suggestion that this track I should start over with again, anyone agree or feel theres something to work with here?

Thanks.