Nice breaks remix.
I think you should use a synth for the original melody.
The bass is really nice.
You've added too much crashes.
imo it should have stayed as only breaks.
This doesn't top the original.

Decent 6.5/10
Omer.

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Great stuf. Very good sounds and good structure. I love everything, it's very dreamy and relaxing. Keep up the good work. I usually don't give ratings, but in this case i would say definatly an 8,5/10 .

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@ Romi: I'm glad you liked it!

@ The Drow: Dunno if it top the original, or not because i never heard the original version I just want to make some relaxing chilled trance and i found midi with this awesome melody Anyway, thanks for comment!

Have a nice day,
Damian

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Originally posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] @ The Drow: Dunno if it top the original, or not because i never heard the original version I just want to make some relaxing chilled trance and i found midi with this awesome melody Anyway, thanks for comment! Have a nice day, Damian

The original is wayyy over this remix.
The main melody shouldn't be a piano, really, it just doesn't fit.
Ditch the delay too.

Omer.

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The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

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Originally posted by The Drow The original is wayyy over this remix. The main melody shouldn't be a piano, really, it just doesn't fit. Ditch the delay too. Omer.

This is not supposed to be a copy of Planisphere song. This is my version of it, my soul inside. I think, that piano fit perfectly to the melody. I really like it. My point is - remixes of songs are not copies of them, they are completly diffrent interpretations. So, original synth fits good to melody? Ok, but i just want to make something with my taste. Too bad, you didn't liked it.

And have a nice day,
Damian

Anyone else want give me some feedback? As unexperienced producer, i need it

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No?

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I love when the percs come in at 0:30, nice basses later, too. Good driving kick around 1:35, it feels like this track is going somewhere. Around 3:40 the track is feeling a little bit stale, it's all the same melody and bass that I've been hearing for a while now. Nice strings again around 4:45, that's about it!

Overall, pretty good track, nice and dreamy and relaxed. It's just a bit too long for too little variety.

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