What's up everyone? Just bringing out a new track and hope the public likes it. It's been sitting around on it for a little while and decided it's almost finished. The ending isn't really done, but you tell me what you think.

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showmp3....28099&aid=13103

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this is a REALLY good track! the only thing that could be better is the bass, there isn't enough bass in it lol.

Thanks Tieann! I'll fix the bass up for you and some other stuff and give me some thoughts afterwards Keep them replies coming.

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nice, cant wait. i listened to the reality is here too, its bangin! same thoughts on that one tho - the bass isnt deep enough at all, but the rest is just kickass

i think youd like my new track, i just posted it in this forum, check it out if you can

Thanks tieann! I'm in school now, but I edited the song and I'll upload later. Hope you all enjoy it.

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Hi dude,
I concur about the bass, is too monotone.
All happens to sudden though, I though the intro would be better, above all the break, but all is appearing very fast in my very personal opinion.
I would work out more with the structure, extending all and adding more elements, sounds a bit plane atm.
Keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Thanks for the input kopi. Yeah I could drag it out a little longer, but for some reason I'm dead on thoughts of how to expand it heh. I guess I'll wait a little while and see where it ends up. Thanks a lot for the replies guys you have no idea how much it's helping me.

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Good track with nice ideas. I agree about the bass. needs to be a lot beefier imo.
There doesnt seem to be much of a mixable intro and outro which could be worth looking at if your after dj support.
If im being picky id say the main arp riff sounds a little muddy compared with the rest of the mix...maybe try eqing it just a touch to brighten it up a bit.

good sounding track so far tho

i think that everything about the bass has been said... i noticed a few clicks, check that. The end cut needs more room, it sounds like chopped. Besides that, it is a good track. By the way it reminds me some oldschool techno, but just a bit.