this is quite dark melody wise. i think for those strings they need to be less 'midi' sounding. make the attack longer and play it without any quantising applied. so they sound more human.

add some reverb to the strings as well..


some of the notes clash a bit.

sorry, i aint diggin this at the mo. keep workin on it and apply it to some drums etc..

rich

___________________
*** Sig edited -> no banner ads in sig
----------------------------------------
http://img404.**************/img404/2794/deresionbanneryx4.jpg
www.deresion.com

well i deleted it after me having a freakout at it

since then ive been trying to master my psytune better and i made the lead synth sound more evil etc

___________________
Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

Hi,
Rich said pretty much all what should be said about this tune, also, work more with the Contrabass/Cellos combo making a bassline, the flutes are out of place if you are going orchestral, some pizzicatos would do the job getter instead.
In overall, needs a lot of work buddie, sounds like a super nes midi soundtrack, but decent ideas .
Keep it up .
Kopi =o.

___________________
My forum for Down Tempo/Ambient/Chillout Music Producers.
www.chilloutworld.com
Where the world spins sligthly slower ...

hi! thanks for the answers.. even if i deleted the tune.

im thinking of making a similar tune for psytrance maybe with some creepy ass saw instead..

or make a chillout with a creepy feeling .

but i will take what you said in mind then!

___________________
Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

quote:

Originally posted by Dj Cola hi! thanks for the answers.. even if i deleted the tune.

It seemed pretty random at the start, but near the end I liked how the tune came together. It HAD potential anyway. The note release could have been extented and you could have also played around with some reverbs

quote:

im thinking of making a similar tune for psytrance maybe with some creepy ass saw instead.. or make a chillout with a creepy feeling .

These are a great ideas. Keep experimenting dude!

___________________

i cant believe your still posting in this thread! all my other threads have problem with not getting any review for the first 24 hours but now when i made some string thing in like 30 minutes then every1 has to post

___________________
Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

quote:

Originally posted by Dj Cola i cant believe your still posting in this thread! all my other threads have problem with not getting any review for the first 24 hours but now when i made some string thing in like 30 minutes then every1 has to post

dude you got 18 replies for your last song.. i think thats pretty damn good, even if you have been one of the sir post-a-lots in the past little while

this... not my style, the melody seems chaotic, the sounds are amaterurish and just doesn't flow very well. listen to the others, they had some nice advice