Hi,

This is a piece i'm working on at the moment. I want to use it as an intro or outro for my next (unofficial) full cd album. Tell me what you think of it and what could be improved.

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...6A178Z326KIB8BD

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Last edited by Romi on Feb-16-2006 at 20:42

ok, listening......

nice strings/pads in the beginning
piano melody is good
bass could sound better
percussion is ok, like the filtered clap

nice atmosphere overall, piano is really good, liked it.

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great atmosphere and very soothing sound here. the strings are well done and the piano even better. I personaly enjoy the bass sound but it could be brought up a bit more... the breakbeat rythms and subtle effects work perfectly, you should work on an album/ep and send it out to labels...

Nice strings, what vsti it is? They are really cool and the piano is really cool also, I would use another bass sample, deeper imo, the drums are the only thing I dont liked at all, they are really weak and muddy, besides the samples I would work really hard the mixdown of them because is really bad, sound like a style from a casio keyboard.
In overal, this has potential for to be a kick ass tune man, I just would fix the drums that are horrible imo, and would pick up a better bass sample, other than that I really enjoyed the piano and strings .
Keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Yes, the track is still far from finished, and i definatly going to change the drums.

@kopi_luwak: The strings are from Atmosphere.

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Updated version here:

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...6A178Z326KIB8BD

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Last edited by Romi on Feb-16-2006 at 20:42

excellent great athmospheric track 8/10 intro could be a bit more full...right now it sounds as if the track is half finnished.

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the begining is beautiful. like moving clouds or a white blowing curtain....

i dunno how far finished this is, but i thing its fucking great right now. the abrupt ending just adds to the overall soundscape i had in my head.

great track man, awesome.

as far as whether its an intro or outro, that depends. if the last songs real mellow, this would end it great.

however, as an intro, the ending lends itself well to a mystery about whats next.

really, with a tune like this you cant go wrong.

PM me if you release anymore on here bro, seriously.