Hey mate, that sounds like a real nice start to a tune. I like the saw synth at the start, but after the bassline drops I think you might need to adjust the melody to suit, it gets a bit repetative. Sounds like there's some nice elements coming in throughout, with the right attention to detail you can defo make it an awesome breakdown. I love the little breakbeat coming in just before the track kicks in again and after phrases. Work hard and finish it!

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cheers for the review!

may change the melody a little bit later in the song but i understand that it does get a bit repetative was hopin the other elements wuld break it up a bit before i change the melody to sumthin else.

definately wanna finish this one, i have a tendancy to start tunes but never finish them.

thanx again!

Hey,
The intro is very cool, straight to the point and uplifting as hell, however I think it needs more Powerhits and swoosh effects to add dramatism imo, an voice with filter would kick ass in the intro though, like an astronaut one.
In overall, the melodies are really cool, but the intro is way to long though, it kinda tease you to be waiting for the drums to appear, I would try to add more powerhits, swoosh effects, to begin to add drum elements earlier, once all begins to sound together, it sounds a bit saturated, I would work with the levels, but you said you are working in the mixdown so I will avoid that, so far I like the tune dude, looking forward to listen to the final version, nice job .
Kopi =O.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak In overall, the melodies are really cool, but the intro is way to long though, it kinda tease you to be waiting for the drums to appear, I would try to add more powerhits, swoosh effects, to begin to add drum elements earlier

Agree with Kopi...

-Cool intro!
-Maybe try to play with the cutoff of the arp or the sound itself, it becomes - as already said - too repetitive...
-BD/Bass a little bit weak
-Breakbeat fill-in: nice idea!

well, finish it! It is worth finishing it...

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