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ive been working on this tune for a while in flstudio 5.
thx in advance for constructive criticsm or praise



-will

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Last edited by wizniz on Mar-19-2006 at 22:59

synths used:

fm7
fruity boo bass
evm bassline
evm syncoder
ts404

enjoy!

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srsly cool track. originality is the shit
i found the kick kinda disturbing.. i think it has with the volume levels to do. the bass is awesome! funky, with a touch of programming in it.. what that means, i do not know....
soothing melodies, however it felt a tad random at times
this is more of a listening experience than a dancefloor groove, if you want my opinion. i like it alot! great job baby, great



you americans with your lawsuits


lolrus

thanks for listening, man.

the kick is a little too loud, thats true.

working on a dif version but ill probably tire of it lol

-will

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This is a boring song with the potential to be good and a shy production waiting for that boost of confidence. First of all loose the clavischord. This ain’t the 70’s man! LoL The clavischord is the instrument you used to make the bassline. Just change instruments because the bass sounds too dated.

There are some other elements in this song which remind me of other tracks I listen to. For example there are certain instruments I hear in the background waiting to come out in your track which sound similar to this:

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You see how they give life to the music. Your attempt at expressing these same elements comes off as shy, hence the boosting of the confidence. Finally, add another track to your multi-track and use this track to lead the song because as it is currently your song sounds like one big loop because it lacks any variation. But if you insist on keeping what you have then rework your production so that it sounds less repetitive and more enjoyable to listen to.