Hi guys,

This is my first time posting on here so i hope i have stuck this in the correct section.

Anyways, this is a track i have written with a few guys, any feedback is welcome. Its been getting played out on the radio and a few clubs.


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http://s21.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...5M0NNO9VVYSDHC1

Written by DJ Alliance

Co-Written and produced by Alias 5

Co-Produced & Engineered By Alpha 1


All feedback Welcome


If anyone wants to plya it out let me know pls

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Hardcore Till I Die!

0-1:00 - too repetitive imho. I think it could pick up quicker
At 1:53, it's all starting to pick up.
3:00 - Bassline notes change and the energy is picking up.
Nice little break now with a great atmosphere.
4:40 - Really lush, lead sound and now the arp comes in.
The track is really moving now. This is definitely top notch material in my eyes. I'm listening on headphones right now, but I'm really loving all the sounds. It doesn't seem to get dull to me. I'm looking forward to hearing every new break to come in and what not. I was really hoping for their to be a second more intense break, but I guess not =/

Overall really nice production. Pretty clean or so it sounds. This is my kind of trance with a little less repetition or at least not adding in 2-3 elements at the same time. Really nice work here

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Im loving the lead sound on this track also. I think the production could be a little better and mabey more effects to fill up the repeating 8bar loops.

overall...nice work

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Hi mister =)

I have got a question for you.
Why does such a great track have such a boring intro?
honestly I was about to turn this of but then i heard some changes i head the tb303 kinda lead and that got my attention , then came the wonderful euro strings and they are perfectly mixed and this continues till the bridge melody comes and that melody is simple yet great , and the break is good but could used some more Fx I enjoyed the break buildup. but the way you made the build up gave me hope of more energy for the klimax , Maybe some harder drums and a deep baseline mixed whit the original one. but hey thats just my personal taste.

The fixes:
more Fx
change of baseline
more deep to your kicks @ klimax part.
Maybe some tribals or perc changes,

My personal opinipon
otherwise great track and nicely produced. //Mavve.A

Thanx for the feedback guys.

Ill take aboard your ideas for improvements.

As for the intor, well it's long and boring for a reason: the DJ needs time to mix in the record so we decided to use a long intro/outro. Its mroe of a progressive track than anything else, so we didnt want a lot of change throughout it.

As for the breakdowns, we didnt want too many, we felt one long one was enough, however when we do a vocal mix we may change a few things around.

Ill stick another one up in a min that we are working on at the mom. Youll see the difference.

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Hi again, As for the intro you could maybe use some fx or nonmelodic elements but still thats my personal opinion?
I can wait for the other one.

Ciao ///mavve

Yeah I definitely think adding some more elements slowly would rid the listener of boredom.

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