overall sound is very low mate. you need to push the volume up. you've got a nice structure.

sounds like an old trancer. was really getting into it then you cut it off.

good start tho.

kane

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Ah thanks buddy, yeh i forgot to pull it into cool edit or something to push the volume as exporting from reason produces a low volume output

but thanks for the feedback kane

kick is nice. loads of low end. nice slappy top end. i like.

bass and kick work well and give a good drive. the levels are very low. turn up everything in the mix except your bass and kick. they are good. really good.

the track has a real fast pace. your percussions work well in creating this. and the fast pulsing bass is another good addition to the drive.

melodies are good.

overall a proper mixdown and a bit of mastering will make this a playable track in the harder euphoric trance sector.

good work.

rich

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Cheers rich,

really appreciate the feedback friend, ill cetainly have a look at it tonight when i get home

Cheers rich,

really appreciate the feedback friend, ill cetainly have a look at it tonight when i get home

talk about a teaser...hehe

sounds spot-on, and as previous poster said, has a good drive.
Im really interested in hearing how the rest sounds, its hard to get a good picture of the track without the complete package

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Hehe, sorry about the teaser.

Thanks for the feedback dylan, i really appreciate it and i promise ill flag you a link when its done

Cheers

Paul

hi,nice beginning - love the bassline and claps and general percussions - the kick is a bit too punchy for me...really good energy coming through with the synths,strings and acidy sound..love the change in bassline - sounds promising! love to hear more...

adam

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Thanks Adam,

Appreciate the feedback friend. I'll be sure to post a link when the full track is done if you want to have a further listen.

Cheers,

Paul