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Originally posted by Dj Cola Hey there! i have been fiddling with this track a bit but not that much. just wanted to know if you want me to keep working on this? other stuff: bpm: 145 synths: sytrus only.. other: some samples http://download.yousendit.com/B82889836B2724CF yeah i know its YSI but it was the first thing that got in mind and well im to tired to host at soundclick.

hey mate, try and finish the track, it starts of good, i like the way the bassline has this lowering sound its good. you have a nice clear kick there, i think if you were to use this for a track try and add more fx's to this first 2 minutes to make it extra cool also try and find a really good leading synth with lots of energy that fits in well with the kick, good job and i want to hear the finished version! good luck,

bidor.

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thanks bidor .

im working on the lead sound.. its hard to make your own stuff with sytrus, its a spacestation (problably nothing to zeta but still).

what did you think of the percs and acid line? is there anything i can improve?

was the filtering ok or did it cut?

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

I got disappointed when it ends... so I hope you finish it!

Akia

well thanks!
im just wondering though are you guys being dissapointed beacuse it was good and short or that the pre break part sucked?



ive made it longer (the break and the "climax") its around 3 min now.
but i dont have a lead synth, the idea in the break is that the strings will get replaced with the supersaw wich will turn into the lead.
right now i have only added the string (wich sucks) and a ducked saw...

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

love the beginning that kick and bass work really well together. good the way you bring the bass down a few keys then back.

great sound so far would loved to have heard more though.

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Thanks dude! .

im trying to get some cool lead sound but its hard, im thinking of dling some kind of synth demo using it then export the tune ^^

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

yes, nice groove dude. feels like your streaming along in the beginning, which is a very nice trance groove. i like the stutter transition too.

acidy lick is cool too. tight tech-trance.

definitely keep going. now just more melody, cherries and whip cream.

haha thanks dude

ill upload a bit of update tomorrow i think before i go to stockholm .

still havent found a good lead sound, anyone that could maybe direct me to a demo to a good synth or something (since sytrus is teh suxxor at leads)...

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

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Originally posted by Dj Cola well thanks! im just wondering though are you guys being dissapointed beacuse it was good and short or that the pre break part sucked? ive made it longer (the break and the "climax") its around 3 min now. but i dont have a lead synth, the idea in the break is that the strings will get replaced with the supersaw wich will turn into the lead. right now i have only added the string (wich sucks) and a ducked saw...

No, the pre break part dont sucks so I really want to hear your longer version but the link will not work...

Akia

hehe i havent updated it yet!
im working on it though but right now im spending most of the time trying to find a good lead sound .

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

Cool, I like how the bass fades in. Hihats are neat.
The fill with the reversed samples is awesome.
Only thing I don't like is the bass chord progression, it sounds so familiar and overused.