HI !

Have been working on a new track!

It 's now up 2 you to tell me if the track got potential or not!
OBS!!!!! Is not any fullversion sthis i just a sample.

Snowave!

http://beta.yousendit.com/transfer....7829C3E364DA2F7

hey there! again .


the kick feels weird it has a "boing" sound if you have high volume.

the percs are interesting! i like your sounds that make a start for the pluckish synth.

the bassline has to little low end i think!
the sidechained/ducked saw thing is cool.

the melody is cool, i think you can get some great stuff from that melody.
i think you should keep working on this track!

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no, but seriously, they feel good

kick is weak imo

percs at the beginning need beefed up.

melodically i like it. i like the automation you used to introduce the melody. bass isn't bad. i think with a better kick it would sit well.

it has potential!

good luck

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Originally posted by Dj Cola hey there! again . the kick feels weird it has a "boing" sound if you have high volume. the percs are interesting! i like your sounds that make a start for the pluckish synth. the bassline has to little low end i think! the sidechained/ducked saw thing is cool. the melody is cool, i think you can get some great stuff from that melody. i think you should keep working on this track!

the kick could deopend on overfloating bass tha lies behind it. could make d the kick shorter. But it might kiolll the feelin also.

Bass lines i might confused because i used 2 different bassline. so it depend wich ones you means?

thanx for the coment anyway. =)

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Originally posted by dj_kane kick is weak imo percs at the beginning need beefed up. melodically i like it. i like the automation you used to introduce the melody. bass isn't bad. i think with a better kick it would sit well. it has potential! good luck

Perc well. i i guess that pull freq. up. The kick. might do have a problem to change the kick because it s hard to fin kick that fits to this trac. It 's horrible to say that this was the best kick for the moment that i 'll could. find But i start realise that i might to find a better one. Thanx for feedback.

Yeas please, I want to hear more! So I hope you finish it (och de andra...?)!

Akia

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Originally posted by Akia Yeas please, I want to hear more! So I hope you finish it (och de andra...?)! Akia

Of course! Dvs Självklart. JObbar på de flesta som sagt =)

The kick is nice and punchy but lacks a bit of the low end punch. Bass line could use more low end and drive. The off-beat saw is cool. Not sure I like the pulse lead as much, although the melody is nice. Definately something that sticks to your head.

Hahahaha very funny!
Dude! your oppinion confuses me totally!!! =)
I like to hear your oppinion about the track and i 'm not mad or anything but i finding this very funny to hear different thoughts about it that way almost totally different. You must agree about that.


Check the rewiev

The kick
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Dj_Kane sais kick is weak imo.

Dj Cola sais the kick feels weird it has a "boing" sound if you have high volume.
I thinks he means overide (means that boing was made when kick hits over the low freq that causes the boing sound) must be obviously.right???

Eldritch sais. The kick is nice and punchy but lacks a bit of the low end punch. Could be the same thing he 's try to tell as dj cola means but still not the sam same because lack means slowig after. It means that i should short it.

The bass
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Dj Kane sais. The bass isn't bad.

Dj Cola sais. The bassline has to little low end i think!
Does it means it's to short. or should put to lower octaves??


Eldritch sais. The bassline could use more low end and drive.
This is the part both Cola And Eldritch confuses me because i used 2 basslines in this track wich means that i wondering wich one could it be? hmmmmm...


The percs
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Dj Cola sais: The percs are interesting! (well is in the good or bad way???)

Dj Kane sais: The percs at the beginning need beefed up. (Thats proof that s must be bad before they will be ok)

Do in this case Eldritch did not meantioned anything about percs. So no diskussion about that =)


The melody
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The only thing that you all have agreed that its cool or nice wich makes the forth element. amazing.

Dj Cola sais. The melody is cool,

Dj Kane sais. It has potential!

Eldritch sais. Although the melody is nice. Definately something that sticks to your head.

Do thing eldritch meantioned was maybe bass 2 do. Not sure I like the pulse lead as much??? Could it be it? Must wait and see.


But liked this rewiev because then it proofs a lot.
1. People have different soundcard, volume or speakers or monitor, headphones etc. It depends how people find the qulity or not in the track. An track unmastered or just almost empty with no fill ins at all would be booring even worse, not acceptable at all.

2. People See thing in different ways. On the track because everybody do not need to have the same oppinion. At the end would even been booring. would nt that be.

3. How the song affect the listener ears also because. If the listener is not in the mood to hear this kind of track and would then shutting it off saving the ears for a moment.

Well who cares. Was nt it fun anyway!

Cheers m8:s C Ya soon!