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First very notable thing was the extremely long breathing space between 2.38 - 5.08, not bad . You could raise things a bit more stronger during that long break or atleast add some more background effects to avoid it gettin' too long-drawn. Melodically it's good, no doubt about it. I waited something new to appear when the beat starts again, maybe some soloinstrument to bring some variety to the basic melody, I dunno. Now it's a bit dry to the end.
Drums are in balance and you made some nice things with hi-hats, also build-up works. Is it my headphones or do I hear some noise, whistling or whatever you call it in that piano. Reminds me of some old tracker xi-samples .
Anyway I assume that this song has been fully made with Fruityloops, it would be good to get some more gear/software besides it. Overall I'll give this track 8. Next time just improve things bit by bit and you have a deal soon .
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