I love this track! The emptiness fit imo, but maybe its a bit to mutch of it the first part (before 5). I think you need to add more fx`s (maybe nightbird sounds?). Dont add to mutch things then, so you spoil the atmosphere. Good luck!


Takere!

Akia

Thanks mate

hey mate, you got the hang of the synth work... now add some more effects 'n stuff to fill it up cool tune
keep up the work

Bidor.

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the beginning is rough. i like it when the synth comes in later, but the whole first part I'd chop. the main groove once the synth comes in is cool. you need one of two things though, either more melody or more fx, but some to increase the variation a little. i think that's what you're missing.
good luck with the edits.

hey whats up
i like the melody in the beginnig but the overall introduction seems too boring, or there is not enough. like the bassline, which sounds nice, comes in around like 2:20 seconds, i dont know if you want to make it come in that late, then you should add more elements in teh beginning, to keep the listener more interested. like around 2:50 where you bring in that breath pad, or choir pad, whatever it is, thats really good. the break sounds pretty nice at the start too. the melody at the end, it seems kind of repetative to me, but it sounds good also, maybe a little more variation with that melody and it would be better. i like the bells also.

the percussion i think is too weak in teh song. maybe youshould add some more and put more sfx on them.

i think the song is too long for the amount of elements it has. but it has a nice feel too it, maybe shorten it up a little bit. anywas good work, keep it up

very clean and good atmosphere beginning the track.

intro is too long. bring the bass in about 0:44. would fit perfect there. percussion has too much build on it before anthing comes in. id hold that offbeat hi hat until the bass is in full swing.

synth is nice but you need to bring the bass in way earlier. nice pads also.

breakdown has a nice atmosphere. like the melody and chord progression. very chilled vibe.

you have very good elements for a good track but if you could about half of it out it would sound better. work on the 16 bar system and add layers from there. you could cut out at least 3 minutes of this and make it a good track.

cheers

kane

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Thanks everyone for the feedbacks.... Too bad for me im heading back to my country (Sri Lanka) for a 2 month vacation.... i will try keeping in touch with production but im hoping to do my first gig ova there.... Hopefully i wont have any Tsunami s this time coz i happened to be there lookin at the beach last time the tsunami was there lol....

See ya all guys later