well interesting intro I'd say...
i like that ahhh synth ... but I don't know if i feel similar way about the bass though you tried to go for a non-standard sound...it sounds just strange to me :-/ might be my ears though...otherwise quite a nice one :-)

yo...one more thing...sometimes less is more I would mute that ahh synth theme in some parts at least...not that it's bad when it goes through the whole song...but hmmmm....you know

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Nice to hear something new from you

Nice intro, builds up great.
I like the bassline even though it sounds standard. I especially like the "fluffiness" about it, if you see what i mean

I do mind the vocal, i dont think you should include it, sounds very cheap...

I like it towards the end, the last melody synth is very nice

I miss a real lead though.

The mixing feels like it's building all the time, but it's an early stage so i suppose the mixing is not finished at all.

Nice work so far, upload the final version too

//Alexander

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i like your synths. and your melodies are superb. i love the intergration of all the melodies. they fit so well. loads of emotion!

id like a bit more sub in the bassline imo.

everything else sounds fine in my ears. id buy this if i saw this on armada or somatic vinyl for £7.

maybe some more prominant percussions but you have a nice drive as it is..

great work and huge melody!

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Hey, i missed the 01.mp3 Lets listen to it

Nice sounds, good pressaure in it. It's getting repetetive after a while though.. I concur with palm on every point.
I would very much like to hear a deep and long break in this
It's very intresting, i hope you finish it

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darn, many responses. I very much appreciate your feedback guys!!!
Uploaded a new version now, with a new bassline overall and added another one in the hopes of "filling" it up a little, and made a mini-intro and removed the silly vocal, dont ask me why it got there in the first place also made some other changes in the hopes to take it to the right direction. Many thanks again guys!

- Intro added
- New bassline
- New lead towards the end

Updated Link is in first post

Last edited by Sinnica Hax on Jun-27-2006 at 08:51

another update

- longer intro
- added a guitar to go along with the bassline in the hopes to make it fill in more

link in first post

nice introduction.

i have been listening to the original sample a great deal. your melody was very addictive.

new version - drive is much better. bassline.. it stands out much better. BUT! - i liked the original bassline better. the slight variation is more harsh and hard but the original gave a nicer complement to the main melodies.

also i think you need more presence in your synth strings like in the origial sample.

im sorry but your melodies to me were 100% perfect to me in the orig sample. all the track lacked was a little variation and some low presence.

none the less this still sounds great but the chnages in melody and bass are for the worse in my ears.

its like the huge emotion is now missing??

rich

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I liked the old bassline better too actually, it worked so well together with all other elements.

This is still working but it was sounding better before.

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Thanks alot guys for the input!! will take on the bassline later tonight and see what I can do to integrate it more, will also make a new melody for the part towards the end, sounds a little messy back there as it is now, I will also start working on a buildup, the melody and such comes in too fast, so track should end up around 8 minutes roughly.

once again many thanks for your help, its greatly appreciated!
oh by the way speactra added you to MSN, sorry for the delay. remembered it today and rarely use MSN

Regards, Fred.

starting to take shape now!
Lots of significant changes, new length is 7:49 and size about 13MB or so added a breakdown where I got to train my non-existant pianoskills
noticed some flaws in the arrangement after I rendered this but will fix tomorrow. too sleepy =)
same url as first post

let me know what you think!

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